Is this good enough to be published?

Question

And if it is where at what website?

Life

Depressed doesn't even begin to describe

The pain I am feeling inside

I feel like I am alone in this fight

The fight we call life

It can be hard all alone

No one there to call your own

Not even a friendly face

To cheer you up during this unending race

Some say to get over the fact

That the ones I lost are never coming back

Or the people I once held dear

Could care less if I was even here

Some ask why I am so depressed

Some ask why I am so stressed

If they only could feel this pain that I feel

The pain that is so hard to describe

The only real way to describe it would be

Life.........

Answer 1

I think you're missing a good structure.

You need to use more... creative adjectives.

Proper grammar and speech as well.

You do have talent, but you need more practice.

Good luck!

Answer 2

It is good.  Why don't you try to send it to a magazine like, Poetry.

Answer 3

that is really good you should post it on www.gspoetry.com

Answer 4

It's good just have to work on the ending. Keep it up on poetry and on life!

Cheer up! When things get to the worst they suddenly start to get better.

XD

Answer 5

It's more than good enough its GREAT i love it !