Is this good for a 13 year old? Is it good period, what do you think it means?

Question

This poem has no name

With a hiss,

You curse people to their hearse.

With a miss,

People list fists.

In a heap, the body count tallies.

What are the wrongs and right?

What are the truths, facts and fallacy?

With sighs

Where is the trained nurse?

With a hiss,

You curse people to their hearse.

Weep, minions and opinions tally.

How could this pretense take you?

Answer 1

I think with practice you could be pretty good. it was better than many that ive read here. even if your not just 13.

Answer 2

Honestly, I don't hate it, I usually find the younger mind to be lacking the artistry of poetry, but in this I felt that you put real work into it, and listened to your own voice, well done.

Answer 3

wow! That is so good! It makes you think and sounds so nice , it just flows with your tounge. That is so so so so awesome... wow! Keep writing, you're really great!