Is this good for an essay?

Question

It's an essay on whether or not vivisection (animal testing) is ethical (morally right or wrong)

You can read it here

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=KUZVQTYH

Please don't give feed back on the presentation, it's just the format I saved it in so you could all read it, the printed version looks a whole lot neater..

Answer 1

OMG IT DELETED MY HARD DRIVE OMG DONT DOWNLOAD IT

Answer 2

Um...buddy, there's no words....so, um...ya.

Answer 3

Yeah perfect.  That paper will receive an A.

Answer 4

The only problem I have seen so far is that you say "over 100 million animals each year are experimented on," but in the table right below that it says only 2.5 million have been experimented on in the past 7 years.

EDIT: Then later in the paper you say 50 to 100 million each year. I think after you clear that up it will be pretty much perfect.

It is a great report, I hope you get an A on it (if it's for school). Good job!