Is this good poetry?

Question

Oh Romeo, Oh Romeo,

Do You Really Loveth Me?

This I will Have to See,

You and I Forever Be?

This Could Possibly Not Be,

That WE will Have to See,

Are We Strong Enough?

Surely We can be Tough,

But can we be Rough Enough to Fight,

The Battle That Might cometh to Sight?

I Wonder if we will ever Not be Together,

For we Barely Thought,

What will Happen to Us?

No One Knows,

Not Even Us...

just tell me what u think! thanks!

Answer 1

I'm sorry to say it is just lacking anything substantial in it, It has no reason or feeling and so sits in the abyss.

And so it sits waiting for you to give the reason and feeling that could take it to a new height of expression that allows the reader to know and feel where you are coming from and going with it.

I wish you the best of luck and keep trying because I am not saying it is bad I am just saying it needs to be worked with that's all.  

Answer 2

i think its good

Answer 3

look, a bad poem doesnt exist in my opinion... but unfortunately badly written poems exist in abundants, and im sorry to say this is one of those. i think the author concentrated more on end-rhyme and fell into the pitfall of 'predictabilty'. dont take the criticism negatively becos i can sense its working progress for the author, they like me are developingm- if its yu who wrote it my advice is keep writing, but let your material come from within, dont put too much value in rhyme, worry more about wat it is yu wish the poem to say. hopefully this makes sense and helps even a tiny bit, gd luck!