Is this good???

Question

I wrote it for school but I really like it! what do you think?? It is supposed to be short yet bring up undecided feelings-- obviously you know my feelings by reading it!! I wote it about a boy who everyone used to say liked me but he always ran a way when ever i was near!! kinda strange...any ways heres the poem...by the way-- I kinda like him idk

Hate is Regretted

Though love is regretted even more

experience with the two

***** where will i find you *****

Answer 1

I write poetry too, so I must say I am intrigued by your poem.

It challenges one's thought, like a logic riddle or something or other. It is far from good, it is great!

Answer 2

It's interesting. I like it!

Answer 3

Sooo True!!!!

I Love It!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 4

Hate is regretted (good point!)

Though love is regretted even more (even truer...)

experience with the two (so you know about love and hate?)

where will i find you (conflicting emotions?)

my depiction of this poem is of a girl who's been broken and put back together, but the pieces are misplaced, so finding her way back into love is like a tragedy.

Deeper than you though, huh? Good work! Keep posting. I'd like to here more. =]