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Is this love, lust, or just a poem?

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"Knowing"

Brown eyes,

no disguise,

can't hide.

Grief,

how we met,

can't offset

the fire.

Not sure

where we stand,

take my hand...

kinesthetics at work.

Breathe,

just believe,

don't miss

this kiss,

hold the world,

embrace,

can't replace,

don't forget,

won't regret.

This moment,

own it.

We met

through tears,

no fears.

Hold me,

I gave you

a promise.

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  1. love, lust and a poem...well, well done


  2. U can call it the 1st & the 2nd (love of lust), but hard to call it the 3rd. Nice try.

  3. I love the rhyming scheme in this, as well as the content.  I vote all 3!

  4. I think it is:

    A statement  of

    What fate meant

    After viewing

    Eschewing  

    Renewing

    A feeling

    Leaves you reeling

    Ending

    With a mending

    Sense of healing

  5. Lots of sizzle-- I think love poem! My favorite part, just love these words,

    This moment,

    own it.

    Maybe a little lust going on there, but enjoy, Ahhh memories!!!  Cheers !!

  6. I hope it's all three and wrote for me.

  7. This holds so much to me. It is part of my feelings in words. But oh so much more. I'm not sure if it is to me or not. For some reason it feels so. It is love, lust, and so much more to me. But yet I am afraid so much. I cry, I hurt, I long inside of my being. I shall never forgive or forget that night. There will be "What if's(sp?)?"  the rest of my life for that night. I am not sure what will come of anything anymore, but I sit here waiting, wondering, watching on the sidelines as if someone else is living my life and I'm just a spectator. But as I think about you and our talks and our time so far together I treasure them. I cling to them tightly as if they are woven all together like my security blanket. As if they are one of my objects that are so dear and sentimental to me. I cannot wait till the next time I talk to you, see you, hug you, hold your hand, or just get a big hug from you. But that is just me being me. Till next time love.

                      By The Lady Blessed Be

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