Is this love triangle scenario for by novel overboard?

Question

I am writing a story about a woman named Kimberly Talyor who wakes up one morning to find that she has been missing for a week, and two months later finds out that she is pregnant. She is engaged to man named Eric Johnson, but she knows that it is not their baby, since they both agreed to save s*x for marriage.

During the missing week, she was in Silverlight, the Realm of the Fairies, where she met Derrick Rivers, who is almost (physically and personallity) exactly like Eric. He saved her life. The fairy magic of Silverlight either distorted Kimberly's perception of time or

encouraged a 'fairy-tale mentality', and she married Derrick, and he is the father of her child. But one of his old girlfriends is jealous and sent Kimberly back to the human world.

At six months pregnant, Kimberly starts noticing strange things and an ultrasound reveals that her baby is growing wings. She sets off to discover what happened in the missing week, and Eric goes with her. She and Eric end up stumbling into Silverlight, and are seperated.

Kimberly gets taken in by a group of minsteral fairies, and one of them, Joshua Oaks, is very careful and protective of her, and she becomes convinced that he’s the father of her child, and begins to fall in love with him. But then she meets Derrick and all her memories come back.

So now, she cares deeply/is in love with the three of them, and has to chose one; Joshua, Derrick, or Eric. I was just wondering if anybody thinks that’s overboard, and if I should just stick with Derrick and Eric.

Answer 1

wow that sounds really good

really good

tell me when ur done cus i really want to read it

its excellent romance story

r u going to publish that

wats the title

i want to read ur story really bad

Answer 2

Um, I think it sounds good. You should use all three people :)

Answer 3

Readers tend to hate a girl who has all the hot guys she could ever want and instead loathes her situation. If you do write this, make sure there is another female character who gets some male attention as well, or it just bugs people. :)

Answer 4

Well, for me it's a little overboard, because I think that whenever a person is "in love" with more than one person, they're not meant to be with any of them. So to me, the only ending that would work is if she chose none of them. Call me a dreamer, but I believe that when you meet "the one", nobody else can compete. Also, I can't picture myself committing myself to a relationship where the other person had a hard time choosing between me and someone else, because that means that the other person is constantly on their mind too.

However, if you're planning on publishing this book, I seriously suggest you delete this question. The dumbest thing a person can do is tell everyone what their future book is about. This hasn't been copyrighted or anything, and now everyone can copy you.