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Is this naked as a Jaybird?

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i have a new shirt

and its not clothes.

its the kind you dont buy

or can barely see.

but you put it on

and feel its skin,

funny how you know

where its been.

so i think i better get pants now

you cant go to town without

how do i find some?

the mind with simple route.

searching around

i did get some stares.

maybe its my shoes

or my socks striped glare.

but old man comes to me

says my flys probably down,

or better get drawers!

son, is that how you do

all your chores?

i said i totally knew that

what do you suggest

he said dont be afraid to

wear the old ones with quest.

but i lost them dear sir

i lost them forever...

and then he asked a nice blurt

where does one find

that heartshaped shirt?

i knew what he meant

right then and there,

ran all the way home

socks and shoes windy air...

and right where i remember,

in hem a secret note,

"i love you honey,

dont forget

your funny coat"

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  1. This is funny but you need to work more in making it shine.  First, get that coat off!  lol


  2. amazing

  3. The emporer's new clothes?

  4. Farmer,

    You are turning into a lean, mean poetry machine!!

    Grade  A -

  5. Farmer, eh? Stick to feeding chickens is all I can humbly suggest.

  6. I love how it was long but it read with such condense clarity that I sped through it... twice! I do not profess to know all the meaning of this, but I know it to be there and for the present, I am satisfied...

  7. About as funny as it gets, she said blushing!

  8. lol

  9. I must agree with Dondi, only this is so clever, and cute, and funny, and completely in your style that I am laughing and intrigued by its depth all at the same time. Excellent work.

  10. lol, nice one.

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