Is this poem Sweet romantic nice ...or bad or lame?

Question

tell me which stars

* * * * Excellent

* * *good

* *not bad

*Lame

fail

I can't forget your love

your soul

When you are in my Arms.

I'm empty without you

If you leave i would die.

In Days and nights,there

is happiness in our

eyes when we are alone

we are melting in love.

Answer 1

***

I really like the last part of it :]

Answer 2

is this a joke? If it is, it's not very funny. If it isn't, sorry this is kinda lame. It sounds like you are trying to hard and trying to sound good forgetting that it has to make sense! It's not very deep, "If youleave I would die" come on you can get more creative than that.  

Answer 3

*** very nice