Is this poem any good? (about true love)?

Question

I love you baby,

can't you see,

your beauty is devine to me.

When i look at the pictures you send me,

my fantasy becomes more reality,

with every little piece i see.

No one in this world means more to me,

than you baby; you made me, ME.

A lot of people want to come between us,

but that shouldn't stop us from being together.

Happiness and love will last forever.

When you look in my eyes you see love,

when i look in your eyes i see my world.

You have me in the palm of your hand,

thus i shall love you all through my life span.

Because together we can acomplish whatever we can and desire.

Love is a powerful thing.

It inspires.

If you think for one second this is isn't real,

look into both our hearts and tell me what you feel.

Because emotions and feelings don't lie,

your eye may see one thing,

but your mind sees the things you heart desires in time.

You changed me, made me who i am today,

I want to thank you; my beautiful love please stay.

If i should lose you my life will crumble,

like the crumbs at the bottom of the cookie jar no one will wonder,

but oh how sweet they are,

for not everyone can find someone so sweet and humble.

Yet stands his ground for what he loves and will not fumble.

I found the right girl for me and it feels so good,

no one, not even me, thought i could.

But god has his ways,

so baby, you know im here to stay.

there is no way i will ever think of running away.

You and Me are meant to be,

baby thats just reality.

So what i want you to know is that i love you so.

So Please let your true love come, go....home.

Answer 1

that is so sweet!

I love it!

At the begining, I think its too many 'e' endings but it still flows evenly!

~BlooperZ

Answer 2

my photo wasnt photoshoped lol.

Answer 3

i dont get the last line "so please let your true love come, go... home"

but i loved

"like the crumbs at the bottom of the cookie jar no one will wonder,

but oh how sweet they are"

like how memories are so sweet even once the person is gone. thats my favorite line.

Answer 4

awww she is so lucky 2 hav u! that peom is soooo sweet! u must have worked on it for a while! I LOVE IT and my fav lines r: when you look in my eyes you see love

             when i look in your eyes i see my world

Answer 5

it's so cute. why don't you maill it to your gf ? it reminds me of the song hey there deliliah.

Answer 6

Your poem is awsome bud!! it has great dynamics and is soo sweet. Im sure whoever you wrote this for will be thrilled! i wish i could write poems as long as you

My favorite line is When you look in my eyes you see love,

when i look in your eyes i see my world.

it reminds me of a love i once had,  brought back some warm memories. thnks for sharing!

Answer 7

I tghink this is really sweet, and I don't see how any girl in her right mind would not fall for it, or you for that matter after it! Please put more poems us for us to see, and I have a few of my own that I may whip out as well lol :) Good Luck!