Is this poem any good what do you think about it?

Question

Death looked me in the eye once

He asked me "what makes you different from the rest in the world"

At first I didn’t know how to answer

He asked again "what makes you different from the rest"

I opened my mouth to speak

But he raised his hand for silence and he had it

"What makes you different from the rest is that you are happy to see me"

Death looked me in the eye once and I grinned

Answer 1

very interesting and i like the last line a lot

Answer 2

It seems more of part of skit to be honest.I think it isn't really poetry because poetry is more  

My Perfect Friend

  



  My perfect friend holds me tight

My perfect friend kisses me goodnight

My perfect friend loves me for me

My perfect friend wont let me be

My perfect friend wears dark clothes

My perfect friend loves me loads

My perfect friend knows when in sad

My perfect friend isnt scared when im mad

My perfect friend makes me smile

My perfect friend would run a mile

My perfect friend is sweet at heart

My perfect friend is also smart

My perfect friend is really tall

My perfect friend will catch me when i fall

My perfect friend doesnt just look skin deep

My perfect friend is not cheap

My perfect friend is one of a kind

My perfect friend has one wild mind

My perfect friend is in my heart to stay

My perfect friend might be moving away

My perfect friend made me cry

My perfect friend can make me fly





now that is a poem!

Answer 3

Wow. Dark, I see. Try changing some words to be stronger. I liked the question though. It got me to think. You should realize that other people are like that too, and maybe change it to address that.

Read my poem?

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Answer 4

It's ok

Answer 5

Why dont You Write a begining as to the point of where to ended up speaking to death becouse readers would be confused as to where you got to that point. other wise i think it is really nice besides te fact i dont know how you started talking to death. Pardon any grammer or spelling issues i feel pretty lazy right now

Answer 6

yea pretty good............

Answer 7

good poem

dont quit the day job

Answer 8

not bad, but i don't get how the first parts are related to the second part, there is sort of like a broken link.. care to explain? you could email me