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Is this poem good? I think it is!!

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My friend wrote this..its good..what do you think?

I'm sorry to say

I'm not myself today

I can't explain

Why i'm in so much pain

Everything seems so wrong

and life seems too long

My hearts is aching

Its empty and breaking

And your too blind to see

That I just want to be freed

From this world full of hate

With my hopeless fate

And be able to be

Just me.

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  1. it's good

    the best poems

    are the poems have rhymes

    just continue making poems

    you'll make it better!


  2. Yeah . . . It's not bad at all. :)

  3. i like itt.

    i think it's really good.


  4. ur friend is so good=P

    i really like it !

  5. i like it a lot

  6. I think it's excellent! She's good at poems.

  7. i think it's beautiful... and i love it... i would never ever steal a precious like so just to let you know... hey, i'm a poet and i didn't know it!!!  hahaha

  8. I love it!!!

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