Is this poem good about Lucas Grabeel?

Question

Everytime Im thinking of I think of you everytime.

Sometimes I try to talk i keep thinking of you

Everytime I see you on tv I try to hide in my room

Sometimes when I try to sleep I dream of you

I think that you the cutest one of the hsm guys

No one know how I start likeing you

Everytime I watch a video of you I try to hide but I can't because of your cute singing voice and cute blue eyes

Sometimes its hard for me to stop thinking of you

You are the one I can think you

I just can't tell you how I kile you

You the only one I will keep as a poster

Everytime I look at a poster of you I see beautiful blue eyes

But sometimes you remind me of everything

Only one thing I can do for you its give you beautiful birthday card

Only last thing I can say about you that you have beautiful singing voice

The last thing that you make me happy when I look at a you in video or a poster

But the only thing I cant take you out of my mind

Last thing I think about you that your the beautiful singer ever and have beautiful blue eyes

Answer 1

Why don't you write it in your native language since you haven't approached English yet.