Is this poem good i made it for my ex boyfriend(best answer gets 10 points?

Question

it is over now,no need to run.

one year later,my summers begun.

wasted alot of my time trying to make it work.

i guess it was for nothing cause only you got hurt.

you say "us" not together is killing you inside.

but how is that possible if you havent even died.

Answer 1

wow.  very impressive.  Usually I read poems on here and i'm like.... amateur!!  they usually don't even make sense.  But this flows nicely and works really well!

very comprehendable.  Keep writing!!

Answer 2

Awh, its good.

But its really short so if you wanna give it to him, I would make it a little longer.

And if you add figurative language and stronger wordings, it would be more effective.

But over all, its adorable. (:

Answer 3

You just asked this in another question, and unfortunately it's still just as terrible.  

Answer 4

i think its good b.c u express your feelings and also use his exaggeration in a line.

good work.