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Is this poem good so far?

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Freedom Poem

Freedom is like a bird

Flying through the air with little ease

Vibrant colors, stunning blues and reds.

The air is its limit

Freedom is like a horse

Clip-Clopping through a grassy green field

Air rushing through its mane

The ground is its inspiration

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  1. with little ease? birds fly pretty easily so im a little confused with that. you might want to reword it. otherwise its pretty good


  2. Not bad. When completed let me see it.

    gdmantle7@yahoo.com
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