Is this poem good to you?

Question

I'm Sorry

I'm sorry for everything you've been through

It must've been very hard on you

I'm sorry for all that's been said and done

I was the moon, you were the sun

I'm sorry for not making everything right

But the situation I was in, was very tight

I'm sorry for not lending you a hand

If only I could be a better friend

I'm sorry if it seemed like I didn't care

Lucky for you, your special- someone was there

I'm sorry for breaking your heart

For forgiveness, where do I start?

Answer 1

its a really good poem

Answer 2

wow tht was really beautiful

but i would suggest switching

"I'm sorry for not lending you a hand.

Of only I could be a better friend"

the rest of the poem rhymes and that line does not

it doesnt flow as well

but either way you poem is lovely, i can really relate

Answer 3

There is a sense of rhythm and meter.  I recommend you break it up into stanzas and try using words that give us a better idea of what the poet means by, "But the situation I was in was very tight."  

Answer 4

write it out with the second line fourth line and so on as the first part then the first, third, the ffiths see how that sounds to your ear .see i think the flow would be better then