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Is this poem no good?

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Attempt to cry shout and course

Went to fly crushing on pause

Seeking light digs on sand

Confused heart bleeds for fight

Longed for love received disgust

Hoped for salvation met dooms fright

Blinding darkness mute my mind

Blanket of words killed my psyche

Sweetest love I failed to lock

Hunt my shade on daylights height

Shaking limps begs your hug

Fading life lost in sight

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  1. I like it just fine. Very good use of language but I think some punctuation would make it a lot  better. Great job!! Keep working =)

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