Is this poem okay? need real opinions.

Question

Looking back at all the pictures,

remembering how fun it was,

now realizing it was all fake,

feeling hurt and confused,

the only thing to do

is to get over you.

Answer 1

Sorry, but the emotions feel superficial...and it's a bit cliche. That's just my opinion tho. Try making it more special and interesting by making it your own...add more feeling. Have fun with it and try new things!

Answer 2

It's brillant. It fits in all the relationship between two people and breaking up.  

Answer 3

Excellent.

If you are on a roll add another one or two dozen lines - it will be a better poem and you will feel better.

I believe you have a lot more to say that is ready to burst out!

Best regards.