Is this poem overly romantic?

Question

Love bids the day, to rise.

Some times, she takes the morning air

And rubs it till it’s smooth and warm

Caresses carried, unaware

Upon her breath, they gently form

My sleep she breaks, my day is born

Enwrapped, enriched, encompassed by

Perfume, so delicately worn

My sunrise vision stirs my eye

Reveille rises from dark night

Her aura, shining as a God.

But lo, hands round my neck, grow tight..

“Wake up you useless, lazy sod!”

Answer 1

It feels more environmental.  Is it about the sun?

Answer 2

i like it

Answer 3

I LIKE IT ^_^

Answer 4

Love like rose which rise in the early of day.

Thus like the morning of summer breeze,

soothe the heart of mine with warmth and grace.

Unquestionable kisses of undoubt beauty,

like a gentle gift of endless breathe.

The sole inspiration and mean of my very existence,

enriched, revived, and enwrapped by you.

With the perfect scent of natural blessing,

have my mind and vision clear for you.

As like an angel that stood beside me,

brighten my night and sorrow like the sun.

"poem are a mean of expression of emotion and its best to be use as a connection to the one we care and love the most."

Answer 5

LMAO omg i luv it..!!!

Answer 6

Beautifully done and loved the humor in the last verse!!  Cheers!!

Answer 7

hahahaha

i love it!!!

very nice.

Answer 8

Umm... it's very deep and loving. (until you read the last line). It took me by surprise. That was funny...

Answer 9

Yes in the true sense of the word

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Answer 10

i think a poem is a poem, nothing is over dramatic unless though we talking about a guy or whatever killing people drinking blood etc then yeah i guess thats a little overdramatic but your doesn't seem to be dramatic in any way.