Is this poetic form a trip?

Question

"Dilemma" - a diatelle

Try

to see

you love me,

and I need you,

beautiful mystery.

Is there a trial I must go thorugh,

I'd do anything if I only knew,

only knew that it wouldn't end with a good-bye.

Is this a decision I'll someday rue,

that I took every chance on you,

every chance to be free,

to make life new?

Only we

can't be.

Why?

Information on the Diatelle - good luck - http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/diatelle.html

Answer 1

Very creative.

If you look at only the outline it looks like a hand extended.

So, with that in mind and the message that lies within, I would say, "one hand alone, can not clap."  

Answer 2

Is that what they're called?

Answer 3

If it is a trip I just went on it.

It appears in structure as the wing of a plane...

and, I like it..

Answer 4

----------------In

------------my day

----------concrete

------poetry was all

--the rage, but now we

-----have discovered

--------other less

----------childish

------------forms

--------------;)

Answer 5

This sounds like a fun form with a challenge of meter and rhyme, the type of thing I like to do in the hours before sunrise. I may try it tomorrow morning.