Is this the correct style for a Iambic Dorian Arch Knell Poehem entitled Look What They've Done to My Avatar?

Question

Look what they've done to my Avatar, ma

Look what they've done to my pic

Well they used the wrong one

And the mixed them all up

How can they be so dumb?

Look what they've done to my pic, ma

Look what they'd done to my stuff

I can only conclude that it must be tough

To get things so screwed up

Look what they've done to my pic

Answer 1

I liked it totally different and brought a chuckle to me!  Wish more people would write things that are upbeat and not soooo depressing!   Good Job !!!! Cheers !!!

Answer 2

I feel equally revolting...

Answer 3

Very funny, computers need to be laughed at occasionally.

Answer 4

Five stars and the pulitzer... I was wondering why I was Julie Newmar.......

Answer 5

You're stylin' Change!

Answer 6

Good song!

You're one of the lucky ones...your normal avatar is showing

Someone else here has one showing that's not even saved on his computer any more.

Answer 7

YA is making me dizzy with all the changes - that "Report It" thing is still going on.  Thanks for answering my question - and thank you for the uplifting humor. You're greatly appreciated ♥

Answer 8

I turned into a magic door the other week but it was a 360 pic and I didn't touch it, and my blue friend vanished.