Is this too long, too short, too funny or not enough?

Question

Or is it good?

-Fax Pass in the Fox Trot-

“A dance, if you would”

He spoke in words

of a prince

“I shall, my sweet”

Her face shined

as she stood to her feet

folded her napkin

took to the floor

in his arms she soared

“Your dress looks splendid”

“As does yours…

Your dress COAT I mean…”

I slight giggle slips

at her own faux pass

‘Damn’ she thought

‘Should have wore my black bra!’

One two three

They moved in the glow

of the gold chandelier

Wine cups in a row

He must have sipped

more than a sip

for when he went

to give her a dip

SHE slipped

He tripped

and the cups toppled down

She laughed anew

to remove his frown

and they stood

and they danced

No more fox trot

For when made a fool

with someone you love

you find a happy spin

in a lovely fall

Answer 1

its cute =]

Answer 2

I think it is whimsical and fascinatingly brilliant... I love the love story, it is not perfect but it is real... you have done it again Rouxe, tickled my fancy...

Answer 3

Neutral

Answer 4

perfect the way that it is. I liked it a lot.

Answer 5

Too much forced effort to make the rhymes.