Is this version better? Trigee

Question

Diamond found.............Amongst the coal

Precious stone.............Worth more than Gold,

Weeding ring................With radiant beauty,

Eternal love..................Conected soul.

Answer 1

And where is spell checker?  Weeding and conected?  Take the time with the details, else they will distract from the message...always.  Your trigee is excellent.  It would be even better spelled right!  Now I go and take my soap box with me!  

Answer 2

LOL @ Neonman.  I like it!

Answer 3

This is very good. I like the first poem very much but didn't understand a word of the second one...hehehe

Answer 4

This is an excellent trigee. You and Reenie excel at this form. I think I'll sit back before I attempt another (d**n eraser) trigee. Thanks.

Answer 5

Very good trigee, weeding out spelling bloopers is always worth the time!

Answer 6

Hahaha! This is good!

Yes, what the man on the soap box said too.

(Maybe connected souls?)

Good morning! (Evening?)

Answer 7

The fist one was highly imaginative and a terrific play on words. Well I liked it!  stone... stoned... weed... the 1st one made sense to me. The magical weeding ring.. has the ability to shine brightly green when it is near the cannabis plant. It's earthy tones and delicately woven exterior would make even the most infrequent users of the banned substance it represents ecstatic. A stone that would  represent being stoned.... a marvelous addition to the jewelry box. It truly would be worth more than gold.

However, I personally would not have a use for it.

The second version was excellent, a well done Trigee.