Okay...so I am 14 and I have considered writing. I have an idea for a story. I have only written like 2 pages but I need alot of input. Here is the first paragraph. Can I please have a lot of feedback? I dont care if you trash it, I just want honest opinions and suggestions. Here goes...
Midnight. A full moon, I supposed, looking up at the silvery sheen of light streaming through countless treetops. My footsteps crunched down the narrow, yet steep, pathway. Forgetting my surroundings, I drew a shaky breath and sighed it back out. I closed my eyes and promptly slipped on a crumbling rock, hearing a breath catch. I looked feverishly around before realizing whose breath it was. Mine. Well, not mine for long. I would soon be dead.
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