Isn't this song that my five year old little brother wrote cute? He wrote it after he told a lie!

Question

I wanna go now

I can't tell a lie

I wish I could tell a lie

I can't now cuz my mom will cry!

I couldn't tell a lie cuz now i think my dadd will yell at me!

I now think the Dogs will bark and than it will kill be

but not to well

My baby would cry

If I ever told a le!

Than my Daddy will cry

And my momma will cry!

If I eva said a lie

everybody in the town would cry!

My sisters woud cry if I ever told a lie

YEAH!

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Answer 1

your brother must be seriously abused..

Answer 2

LOL LOL LOL.  You should get a video of him singing it and send it to America's Funniest Home videos...or at least put it on youtube.  LOL.

Answer 3

Too Cute.  Sounds like him and my 5 year old daughter would get along really well!  lol  

To say that child must be severely abused-I agree...you need to change your words.  That child is very smart!  You are a very rude person to say such a thing about that child.  You dont even know them, so keep those kind of opinions to yourself.  How rude!

Here's my daughter's first poem-she was 4 at the time.  It doesn't make much sence, but it is still cute.  It's even a little hard to read, but hey, she was only 4!  lol

Time to play

For you to say

I must give one more throw

And my job is going to end

Then must I have say to make another throw

It must be all gone

Then I must say

To whenever friends

Come must to fray

Now it was time to go

So see you later

I must have go

I will come back

Then it will

Must have one more

Throw to till

Then it must

Throw it's job

Then it was going to end for this song

I must make a letter

for a present

for my baby brother

Adison

The End

Answer 4

wow just reading it makes me cry  

Answer 5

aw bless him-he has a way with words...and whoever said about abuse-SHUT UP!

He simply is in touch with his feelings and is lucky enough to be able to put emotions into words which something very ahrd for young child. I hope he continues to write as he grows up!

However if anything abusive or scary ever does happen or he tells you I hope you know you can talk to childline and NSPCC anytime-you'll find their info online!

Answer 6

LOL DATS CUTE. i agree with lady_cateyes, u should get a vid of him singing it!!

Answer 7

it sounds a little depressing for a 5 year old but its cute maybe when he grows up he will be a song writer