It has a new name, is it the same form?

Question

"Penalty" - a Cardinalcyn (form developed by C.S. Scotkin)

Flames ignite,

break the night,

reveal the key.

Witch casting.

Love by spell,

never tell,

forsaken rede.

Witch casting.

Harm ye none,

vow undone.

Evil intent.

Witch casting.

Heaven's eyes,

justice flies,

Goddess' wrath.

Witch damned.

Answer 1

...and they told us poetry is dead..

Answer 2

"Hi!",

I am not quite shore how this form goes. but it looks great too me.

very descriptive with lots of imagery.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 3

Wow. Witches and black magic really freak me out.

This is my favorite part of the poem:

"Flames ignite,

break the night,"

I pictured a cloud of dark smoke with sparkling fire, and light.

Good poem!  

Answer 4

The cardinal flies

the cyn follows

and C.S.?

she's a Scot

off to see kin!

Well done, repetition adds.  

Answer 5

Whatever did the witch do!  Great imagery and each word precise and haunting.  Well done.

Answer 6

whoa, a Wiccan fire

lights the night,

with golden key

of pure delight!

Answer 7

Eva!  what can I say...I love the poem!  Interesting Wiccan imagery as well.

Answer 8

Very nice.  I like the form and the content...creative.  The short meter and rhyme creates an interesting rhythm.  I'll have to give one of these a go.  Excellent job.

Answer 9

Yes, she's a good little wic...

I'm unfamiliar with the form as I have only committed one or two Cardinalsins.