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Ive heard that sound? poem?

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this poem i wrote about a friend i am very close to. she lives in Chicago, i live in florida (explaining the north part)

its pretty clear what the poems about.

tell me what you think.

I heard that sound today

The one they say

Could echo, even in an empty field

And back into and through your mind

I heard that sound today

The one the say

Would bring love, sorrow

Hate and fear

All intertwined

Yes, I've heard that sound

Coming from a northern wind

That wrestled with the river

It came and went within an hour

But still left with me a shiver

It enters my mind

When I shut my eyes

An attempt to make it dissipate

It is over now, yet I somehow

Still hear this sound I hate

It will continue to echo

As I'm told by my morals

Until her tears I can physically dry

I heard the worst sound in the world today

For on this day, I heard her cry

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  1. i like it :)


  2. I don't like it.  It doesn't make sense to me...Sorry!

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