Japanese sentences using subordinate clauses?

Question

Can someone correct this sentence I made to practice using subordinate clauses?

明日、昨日見た映画を破戒した人の家に行く。

Intended translation: Tomorrow I will go to the house of the person that destroyed the movie we saw yesterday.

I know this is a really weird sentence, but I wanted to practice nesting subordinate clauses XD

Answer 1

Tomorrow, I will go to the house of the person that ruined yesterday's movie.

Ashita, ano hito wa kinou no eiga wo dainashi ni shite, kare no ie ni ikimasu.

明日、あの人は昨日の映画を台無しにして、彼の家に行きます。

Answer 2

昨日見た映画を破戒した人 is kind of a weird thing to say, but I think that it's grammatically OK.

The only thing that I might change would how 明日 is handled.

Maybe 明日には、昨日見た映画を破戒した人の家に行く　but I'm not sure. The 明日 part is the only thing that seems a little awkward to me.

But, overall I think you got the basic idea down.