Judge this poem ...judge it with truth?

Question

Why do we do the things we do?

Why do we even bother?

Why do we do the things we do?

When we know we'll get in trouble

We trash up streets and write on walls

We say bad words and pick up fights

We laugh at friends and we break the law

We do great mischief and were out of sight

Why do we do the things we do?

When we know we'll get arrested

Is it possible to just be good?

Or is that just good time wasted

We get in trouble and do bad things

We get all high and hurt within

We set wrong examples with our bad deeds

We try to be good but just cave in

Why do we do the things we do?

When did we become such a problem?

Is it because we grew and grew......

And then suddenly we felt forgotten?

Its called Why do we do the things we do?

Answer 1

i like it... i ask those same questions sometimes

Answer 2

i like it..really explains the emotion you're trying to say.

Answer 3

I really like it. Those are the same questions i ask

Answer 4

wish it had more veriety.

the flow of the words was off in my opinion.

try to space things out when wrighting, makes it easier to read.

try to use words with "w" less.

otherwise great poem....