Just Another Deck Fix - BURN?

Question

rate and fix and give reason for changes please...

Monsters 16

x3 Stealth Bird

x3 Des Koala

x3 Legendry Jujitsu Master

x2 Mask of darkness

x1 spirit reaper

x1 Marshmallon

x1 Morphing Jar

x1 Sangan

Spells 7

x3 Wave motion cannon

x3 Messenger of peace

x1 Level limit area B

Traps 18

x3 Solemn judgement

x3 Dark Bribe

x3 Secret Barrel

x3 Threatening Roar

x1 CCV

x1 Ceasefire

x1 Gravity Bind

x1 Magic cylinder

x1 Mirror force

x1 Torrential Tribute

x1 Bottomless trap hole

Answer 1

thanx for answering i dont have ccv but im trying to get it. but you see what im trying to do right add the monarch prime material control deck and sub it if my main deck doesnt work. lets chat on my question by edit in answer thanx

Answer 2

looks good to me 8/10

Answer 3

9/10

ONLY THING IS THIS

- 1 BOTTOMLESS TRAP HOLE

- 1 TORRENTIAL TRIBUTE

+ 2 BOOK OF MOON

THEN IT BECOMES A 9.5 / 10

Answer 4

holy c**p

Answer 5

not bad. 4 a side deck pack 3 shadow imprisoning mirrors and 3 light imprisoning mirrors.   main deck- different dimension capsule would get your wave mos quickers

Answer 6

Nice you really know how to make a deck but Try adding 1-2 thestalos the firestorm monarch and side deck some fire troopers.

Answer 7

looks good  8/10