Just Wanted Some Opinions of My Poem...Thanks?

Question

Lost Within My Mind

I wake up each morning,

With a new pain in my soul.

I open my eyes only to realize,

The tears still linger there.

My mind races, questions unanswered.

Should I have moved on already?

I take two steps, I miss you even more.

My mind races, where are you?

Every morning I ask, what if we had never met?

All this torment I never would have felt.

I hate myself for the thoughts I have,

But I can’t control it; I’m lost within my mind.

I pray to God that all this will pass.

That someday I wake up and the pain has packed its bags.

That I open my eyes and tears have gone away.

I pray that someday soon, I’m not haunted by these memories.

Everyday I miss you more, when does it get better?

I wonder again, what if we had never met?

I hate myself today, how can I be so selfish?

But I can’t help it, the darkness overwhelms,

I’m lost within my mind.

Answer 1

i like it! good job

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Answer 2

this is really good, it made me sad because my best freind just moved away, and now im all thinking of her. but i like it good job

Answer 3

really good, very sad though.

I think it would make a good song!