Just a fun deck but how is it???

Question

if you are not going to say anything that is going to make this deck better then please dont post (or what you think is better). or I WILL REPORT YOU!

monsters: 20

3 luster dragon

3 geminin elf (no it's a normal monster not a gemini monster)

3 bountiful artemist

3 insect knight

3 summoned skull

2 sabersaurus

2 charcoal impachi

spells: 3

3 heart of the underdog

traps: 17

3 solemn wishes

3 seven tools of the bandit

3 magic jammer

3 bottlemliss trap hole

2 horn of heven

2 magic train

1 devine wrath

the idea of the deck is to draw alot so i dont run out of hand and while i'm at it gain some LP so it is harder ot kill me. the counter traps are to serve 2 purpose. 1 to negate my opponent's moves and second, to make my bountiful artimist work, the rest of the deck is to make attack. the heart of the underdogs will make me draw like mad and the solemn wishes will be able to make me un killable. if that is not enough, my 1900 atk 4 star normal monsters will beat the day lights out of the opponet. most of the cards are used are common so it is very cheep. i was thinking of useing macro to go along with this deck since there are no reborn cards. i know the card "cry havoc!" can be very usefull in this deck but all i need in the deck is something to stop jinzo and royal decree. thanks for your opponions just make them helpful and incase you have forgoten, this is just a fun deck ( so i dont need solemn judbment or dark brib)... useing heart of the underdog out side of exodia deck(s)

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Answer 1

it is ok.

but here is an armed dragon deck.

monsterz 20

3x armed dragon lv3

3x armed dragon lv 5

3x armed dragon lv 7

2x armed dragon lv10

3x flying kamikiri

1x morphing jar

1x card trooper

3x dekoichi, the battle chanted locomotive

1x snipe hunter

spellz 14

3x level up!

3x level modulation

1x heavy storm

1x smashing ground

1x lightning vortex

1x monster reborn

1x mystical space typhoon

1x brain control

2x pot of avarice

trapz 6

2x light of intervention

3x dark bribe

1x mirror force

with this deck, you can send cards 2 the grave like the high level dragons by using snipe hunter, card trooper, lightning etc. then use level mod to bring em out really early. dekoichis are just there 2 help with some extra draw. kamikiris bring out armed dragon lv 3. the light of intervention keep all monsters face up meaning they can't be set. this means they also cant hide from the armed dragons abilities.

hoped this helped

Answer 2

this deck is really simple, which kinda makes it pretty effecting, the solemn wishes would be really annoying for them. lol only 3 spell cards tho, maybe a monster reborn? ohwell watever it would prolly still beat me.  

Answer 3

LIMIT: lesser traps!

  "final destiny" x2

  " lightning vortex" x3

  "morphing jar" x1

                              try this "with evil hero dark Gaea"

Answer 4

I think its a very basic deck here... Draw, summon, and attack. Not too technical, with complex effect and stuff. I guess that makes it some what fun... but i think the funnest deck at the ones with a theme. by a theme i dont mean like all just dragon... im sure you know what i mean tho... like me i had a out of play themed deck... where most of the card i used required me to remove stuff out of play... and i had cards to bring back any cards that are out of play... and a monster who get 400 atk and def more for each card out of play... and of course chaos sorcer