Just a little something i wrote down.. poem? please read thanks !!?

Question

i lost a friend today

and i lost a slice of my hope

hope that something so great would kick our bond alive again

and in hope that we would have other memories to cherish

just like the good old days

i remember things we done

so extraordinary, as if from the open of a palm, one million feathers would fly to the heavens above

slowly...

without a care in the world we lived life to the full

grass stains and skint knees to show at the next early rise

with yet just another day to live with a smile

tears may fall so fast

and hit hard on the ground

erupting a noise in which i cannot stand

i lost a friend today

Answer 1

Today, you lost a part of you

You shared a history that grew

Tell your friend with utmost courage

Every feeling you felt since when

Push every ounce of feeling to bandage

Every single wound that has opened

Once this friendship starts to mend

Both will fix what had been broken

If it results in a terrible outcome

Then this friendship may be done

Was there an unforgivable deed?

Maybe a feeling the other can't read

I fear it may all be left to the past

Perhaps it was never meant to last

Don't spend too much time to mourn

Because your life will still go on

Everyday you weep for your other

A chance is lost to find another

You lost a soul who shared your life

But there are others willing to share your strife

Never forget your old friends

Strong bonds will find ways to transcend

A true friendship is like a gem

Always leave your doors open for them

Answer 2

It's a nice poem...

It just lack emotions...

But, generally, it's great... =)

Answer 3

good job