Just a poem this time can you check it out?

Question

Take time to look around,

Take a chance where oppotunitymay be found,

The risk is there,

Don't just stare,

Make a break and just don't care

Answer 1

It's nice.  Just the second sentence needs to be shortened so it rhymes with the rest.  Yes I know, not all poetry has to rhyme but I just presumed you wanted all to rhyme.

Answer 2

This poem is about time

invites a person to look around

there is much to see

Don't be shy

take chances but be careful

as there are risks

Look pay attention

Answer 3

share

take the time to look around-

take  chance where opportunity can be found-

the risk is there-

don't just stare, take a chance -

and then lets share-

Answer 4

The meter on your second line is a little awkward.

Perhaps

Take the time to look around

Take a chance and opportunity's found

Will improve the flow without altering the meaning?

Also the first line I added a the to give the structure evenness

Take The time...

Take a Chance...

Make a Break...

It is always hard when you tinker with some's work, so I hope you found this contructive. :)