Just for reads- Alone and Abandoned

Question

One of the poems in my poetry book im trying to get published. Its called Alone and Abandoned

Abandoned

alone in this red

single tears from one eye

kept strong but defeated

brutal world comes armed

family isolated

loved ones detached

children growing 2 fast

adults cry8ing

faith lost

churches burning

freedom shackled

Lost Hope

colorless rainbows

Alone and Abandoned

Answer 1

it's okay i guess. but u could improve.

Answer 2

Very sad

Answer 3

I like your poem it's interesting. Please keep up the great work. =)

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