Just name the day - a poem, care to comment?

Question

Inspired by Elys' FRIDAY Mornin greeting

Just name the day (Rap it up, I'll take it)

If you planet Janet

It's gotta flow Joe!

Make the day Ray

Go not in slow mo

Do the job Bob

Try attack Jack

Wipe the slate mate

Cut no slack Mack

Finish early Shirley

Go get a brew Drew

Game of pool Jule?

Friday review, just for you

Elys if you plz

Dig?

Answer 1

Jellzie, dear, it IS the water in Tasmania, isn't it...bottle the stuff, import it here and you will make a bloody fortune!

Answer 2

"Hi!"

Entertaining.

Well Done!

Cheers : )

Answer 3

to me it sounds like a hip-hop song.

but i am old and gray

don't ask me.

Answer 4

That poem could make people meltz --Jeltz !!!!

Cheers !!

Answer 5

Sounds like that d**n song from the 70's..

50 ways to leave your lover... here are some of the lyrics.

Just slip out the back, jack

Make a new plan, stan

You don’t need to be coy, roy

Just get yourself free

Hop on the bus, gus

You don’t need to discuss much

Just drop off the key, lee

And get yourself free

We sang that song so often it drove even us nuts!!

Answer 6

And the 'top o' da mornin' to you, luv!

I hate to say it sweetie, but if you love music, I want you to go to lastfm.com and listen to a song by Paul Simon called '50 Ways To Leave Your Lover' from the album "Still Crazy After All These Years" that was released in 1975 in the US. Although I love it when people try different ways to express poetry within this community. It is like eating freshly cut fruit and breathing ocean air from the beach in the morning! Oh, by the way, please give the little ones a hug for me and tell them it's from a Blues Singin' Yank In The States...  Grade  C

Answer 7

i gota get outa this place, Ace,

without a trace,of egg on my face

these poems are someone,s mistakes, and such a disgrace,

but a few of them move at a steady pace,

so without a tear i say, they might belong in a Sputnik in outa space,

If i had a greeting i wanted to hear, it would be one that would bring me good cheer,

it wouldn,t have to be on any special day,but all in all it would have to say.

everything in a few simple words,

it would have to make me smile,and then smirk, and make me see that the world is filled with all kinds of people and jerks,

the poem, i would need for the day to run smooth, would have to have words  and rhimes that groove,

something deeper and more interesting than the tube,

i need a poem, like i need spirtual food. that satisfies, and quells my hunger, a poem, that says it all like lightening and thunder.

so dig it Janet, get on the planet,

Joe,the more you learn, the more you know,

Mo, today its your show, Shirley bright and early you gota be, the same goes for you Julie,  and Drew everything for you better ring true, keep it hip Jack, look strack, and Bob don,t be a slob, this is the Friday review, Mack stay in the black,  with diamonds on your heels, Ray,what did you say, that is right this is as good as it feels, if you got something better okay, let,s hear the squeals,    

and that is my comment about a poem and poetess who might slightly be bent, her words and ideas could bring both laughter and tears,

Answer 8

Like it

Answer 9

Java Juice Jive, Jellz Jumping!