Just one more question please? Yea, it's a poem.?

Question

Too Many Questions

What can be said that hasn’t been said before

What can I say that they can’t ignore

What can be said that is for sure

What can be said to even the score

Who will listen to what I’m saying

Who will get what I’m conveying

Who will see which way I’m swaying

Who will dance to the tune that I’m playing

When do I get past these stages

When do my thoughts stop being rages

When do I know I’m one for the ages

When do the words fill all of the pages

Why can’t I escape my mental obsessions

Why can’t these thoughts be true confessions

Why can’t there be freedom with these lessons

Why can’t I find the answers to these questions

©rad110404

Answer 1

I like it. Add some "Where". Here's an idea.

Where is the path I'm taking leading me.

Where is the truth that I cannot see.

Where is the soul that lets me breathe.

Where is the lock; I have the key.

Answer 2

I'll answer in poem...haha

What a good poem,

Have you published it?

I think you should,

it's just too good.

Answer 3

Reponding to the first fourlines only:

The words may be old

but when 'you' say them,

they must be listened to

all over again.

Answer 4

i like it =]

interesting yet holds my attention

Answer 5

sorry way too repetitive for me