Just tell me what you think?

Question

i would like to know if this sonnet is any good. inorder to see if its a succsess and that it converys it message, just tell me what you think its talking about. also im just curious. feel free to add anything!!

thanks

A wave lures me to his wet finger tips

As he draws back I wish to grab his hand

He says he can bring me back to your lips

He claims he knows the way to where you stand

I whisper “Just take me away from here”

And follow him into the sea’s ado

With each weary step my chest burns with fear;

But I believe he will lead me to you

Towards the darkness of the ocean floor

I gradually decline and disappear

Until my panting lungs can deal no more

And their choked gasps can I no longer hear

Upon the ocean floor, asleep, are you

He tricked you too, my love, he tricked you too

Answer 1

wow, pretty powerful, is "he" death? Perhaps the loss of a love one, and you think "he" will lead you back to the one you love that already died?

Answer 2

hmm, i think theres some confusion at the end there the poet doesn't know.

Answer 3

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