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Just the beginning..easy opinion question.?

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What do you think of this as a start for a song?

There's' so much that keeps us apart

Like that fence in your back yard

Such a firm, unbreakable line

Standing hard between your life and mine

Oh,Your drunk everytime I'm sober

I'm young, and your so much older

I don't know why I pretend that's what keeps us apart

Your the only one who could keep me from your heart

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  1. it's lovely!


  2. love it!! it is a great start to a song!!! good luck with the rest of it!!

  3. i like it
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