Just thought I'd like to share...?

Question

Memories bring me

Echoes of voices

Caresses in the night

I glimpse a face

I catch a scent

I feel your hand

You've come to haunt

Renewing my pain

Day you walked away

Should've kept you here

Should've made you stay

Should've said I cared

The things I would say

Now forever too late

Standing at your grave.

Answer 1

Pretty good, if i may give some suggestions.

Usually poems, and this is my opinion on poems, when describing emotions should be very descriptive. What type of pain are you feeling? What does the character feel on the recollecting of things? in this poem i feel like the character has a lot of action going on, but is lacking  emotion.

Poems are never finished, you can keep rewriting them and rewriting them. When i write my poems, i put all my thoughts and emotions in one swing, giving it that raw feel. You're poem was good though, and my suggestions is not a correct one. But just my opinion. Keep posting!

Answer 2

I like it alot.