Just want to know what you think of my poem?

Question

What ever you think, just would like to know your thoughts on my poem.

Dreams once Forgotten

Are Dreamed Anew

A Life Once Stable

Is Found To Be Askew

Memories Of A Life

You Thought You Knew

Where Found To Be

A Dream Untrue

So The Dreams

You Had So Long Ago

Have Been Given New Life

To Sprout And Grow

To Reach For The Heavens

To Bask In The Light

To Tickle Your Fancy

To Your Souls Delight

So Dream Now

Through Out The Night

Let Your Dreams Leap

From That Place Within

To Grow In The Sun

To Never Again

Be Forgotten

With The Mornings First Light

Answer 1

It's good but your title case pisses me off.

Answer 2

oh my gosh that poem is gorgeous! if my bf read something like that i would probably burst into tears lol... really good job

Answer 3

I think it's good. :) I'd like to read more, and I see a clear theme...that's enough to make me enjoy it...plus it sounds beautiful, excellent use of vocabulary my friend. (;

Answer 4

Pretty good.  Get rid of the errors like "dreamed" and "where" in the first paragraph.  Also, the whole dreams thing confuses me.  "Memories Of A Life"- I'm not sure what sense this makes or how it ties in with the poem.  In my opinion:

"And a life you thought you knew

Was found to be a life untrue"

contributes more to the meaning of the poem than:

"Memories Of A Life

You Thought You Knew

Where Found To Be

A Dream Untrue"

Answer 5

Nice. Good form. Deep.

Answer 6

wow.... its good i liked so much.....

Answer 7

this is good :)  I like it......i love writing poems myself

Answer 8

its really good