Kinda emo. What do u think?

Question

Left alone with her thoughts.

Where were you when i needed you most?

This abandonment cuts so close

So close to my heart and it hurts so badly

Take last night and finish what you started

Wounds already mar my flesh

Finish me

Cause i'm waiting for the end

It's the withdrawal that kills us

Solitude can cut so deep

Like a knife in my back

Like poison in my drink

I cried myself to sleep last night

I hope you're satisfied

You're instilled in my dreams

Filling every inch of my mind

And i never thought it possible

to love so much it hurt

i thought it was a thing of poetry

until i felt it's blade

Answer 1

Hi,

I really seriously liked it!

I was sweet, very emo & dark, thats why I liked it!

Writings a great way to express your feeling, isn't it?

Keep writing!

xoxo <333

Answer 2

i like it a lot

its a little emo but i feel like poems should be that way, idk mine usually are.keep writing definitely

Answer 3

Wow. I love it! But that's just me......... :]