Knock my door , my new poem , any thought?

Question

Knock my door

you knocked on my front door, asked me to get you in

i opened it up, you slammed it when you were on the way out

your aggressive shutting got the door to creak

and that sound resembles the yowl at my nights

as you came to my life ,running with open arms

but it ended up having those salty tears in my eyes

honey where have you been while i cried my heart out?

i'm still waiting under this lintel, waiting for you

so if you see an open door just know you can walk though

i dont mind I may face the front door once again

at least your beauty can sweeten any kind of pain

Answer 1

Good passion.  Check spelling on some words.  Rework lines 3 and 4.  Great feeling.

Answer 2

I like the intention of the poem, but the grammar mistakes deter me from  getting a good sense feel of it.