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Language arts 8th grade ?

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I am to write a story using the following words.

autobiography non-fiction First person narrative Perspective

Memoir Consanguineous Autonomous Melancholy Optimistic Inadequate

My story is the following, does it make sense? if not please help me out to improve it.

Amy always liked reading different news "perspective" of her moms "autobiography". Every "narrative" are just "memoir" about her "melancholy" moments. Amy tried to look at the "optimistic" parts of the articles being published. In her moms "first person narrative", she would trace her "consanguineous" roots, making her story "inadequate" to every detail. Amy tries to autonomous as an artist, so when she becomes famous she will too, write her "non-fiction" story.

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  1. I did a grammar and spell check and only two items popped up, one with punctuation and one with a verb tense.  Here is the result:

    Amy always liked reading different news "perspective" of her moms "autobiography". Every "narrative" is just "memoir" about her "melancholy" moments. Amy tried to look at the "optimistic" parts of the articles being published. In her moms "first person narrative", she would trace her "consanguineous" roots, making her story "inadequate" to every detail. Amy tries to autonomous as an artist, so when she becomes famous she will too; write her "non-fiction" story.


  2. everything is perfect exept for the first sentence i would rearrange the words. like Amy always liked reading her moms autobio from different perspectives OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT

    hope this helps

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