Let's smoke one more, OK?

Question

Foggy

Fogey

Smokin' the stogey

As I view

Hue

And you

Wis-dumb

Founded

Well rounded

Off edges

He hedges

The bet

To get

A Head

Un-lead

But leading

Bleeding

Blue blood

Stains

Explained

Pain

Relieves

On eves

Of

Tomorrow

©rad071908

Answer 1

thats really nice.

your so creative, the pattern really interests me.

amazing.

Answer 2

i guess....

if you feel better..

whatever your question was..

Answer 3

wat the h**l was that about?

Answer 4

that'll leave a stain

Answer 5

Hey Hydro, you can sing this to Bob Dylan. Very cool!

Answer 6

What a unique set-up and style!  I've read it about 4 times and it pops out something different each time.  I love it.  

'un-lead but leading bleeding blue blood'

'stains explained pain relieves on eves of tomorrow'

beautiful phrasing and a most interesting structure.

Answer 7

Smoking Poem:

People think smoking is cool

think again

because they are being a fool

as I will explain.

Its bad for your health

but a person has a choice

buying  smokes can affect your wealth

please think while one has a voice.

Quit now before its too late

also once you start

do yourself a favor and don't wait

it can damage your heart

Also when one smokes

over the years it can kill

plus they will constantly choke

and indeed they will

Answer 8

that's kind of stagnant.  i like it

Answer 9

It doesn't have to reach our lips,

or penetrate our lungs,

the smoke and hue you talk about,

for some is always there.

We need not strike a match,

flick a wheel or ignite

for some the Fog just thickens,

and is added to our plight.

So next time you are thinking of

Yesterday's bygones,

Have the strength to douse it out,

And the courage to move on!

Answer 10

hydropro,

I don't know what's rolled up in that C-gar you're smokin', but mind if I have a toke? My exhale...

CIGAR (Smoke 'Em If You Got 'Em)

Foggy

Smokey

The old man's stogy

Smoker

Joker

Playin' poker

Puff like

A tuba

Havana

Cuba

Smoking pleasure

Leads to

Cancer

The box

Of El Productos

The Turkish blends

Of Cairo

Rolled into

A tight spiral

Aroma's

So delightful

Cherry blends

And Black & Milds,

It all depends on

What's your style?

My uncle started young

His health has now succumbed

Spotted kidneys and black lung

Brown stained teeth

And absessed gums



Leaves and tobacco

Burn as one

Fathers welcome

Their newborn sons

Blue bloods smoke them

By the ton

Celebrating their

Enriched sums

Puff puff pass...

My uncle was a heavy cigar smoker and us kids suffered when he was in the room. We called him "dragon breath" and "death breath" and it was long before they made you smoke outside.Your rendition was off kiltered and unmelonomic. I don't associate smoking with hedging bets, wisdoms unfounded or eves of tomorrow. Some of your prose was tasty and gritty enough though... Grade  D +