Let's write a story together - Everyone add a chapter?

Question

Let's write together a story: everyone adds a chapter, starting from where the other one has ended his own, then we see where the story went

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Detective Keen was the best hardboiled detective in the whole Raincloud City. And he was puzzled. Really puzzled. Usually, he had two types of clients. The first type was formed by sultry, glamorous, boring ladies storming in his office with some simple nuisiance to solve, promising everlasting love and gratitude, but usually very few money. The second type was formed by freaks, weirdos with even weirder stories to tell, and weird crime stories to solve.

So, when Kane Keen was faced by three sultry, glamorous, bored ladies with a really weird story to tell him, he didn't know what to do.

"And you are telling me that your requests are simple?"

"Yes", replied Miss Grant, a bubbly and feisty redhead with two oddly white, blank, eyeballs staring at nothing, blind as a bat. "I want you to retrieve, and give me back, my lost eyesight"

"PLEASE, SEARCH MY HEARING!!! I'LL GIVE YOU EVERLASTING GRATITUDE IF YOU BRING BACK MY HEARING", was screaming Miss Blue, a very loud brunette, lovely in her black cocktail dress, a big hat dangling over her head to chastly cover up her missing ears.

Miss Blaine, a platinum blonde, pin-up by trade, simply nodded, pointing with a sad smile her carefully painted lips. She couldn't voice her requests, but she also was here to retrieve something, for she lacked a tongue, and a voice

Now go on...

Answer 1

As her story unfolded, he discovered that before Miss Grant lost her sight, her passion was being a voyeur. Her sister, Madame Ruth, ran a house of ill repute.  Miss Grant would often look through secret two-way mirrors into the rooms used by  the prostitutes and the clientele. “This checks out with my ‘See No Evil’ theory,” thought Detective Keen, as he envisioned her peering through the mirrors. “She was using her eyes to watch illegal s*x acts--which could be construed as evil by certain parties.”

Next Detective Keen interviewed the equally alluring Miss Blue, who stirred up long ago memories from his youth. “She reminds me of Princess Leia of the Star Wars movies,” he thought to himself.  Ã¢Â€ÂœPrincess Leia’s body was so s**y in that gold bikini when she was in that scene with Jabba the Hut. I can just picture Miss Blue in a gold bikini, with her long black hair braided in that cinnabun hairstyle completely hiding her lack of ears.”

“What was your profession before you lost your hearing, Miss Blue?” Detective Keene wrote on a large legal pad and handed the question to her to read.  Ã¢Â€ÂœI was into phone s*x,” she replied in a sultry voice. “You must have seen our ads on television.”

“Right,” replied Detective Keen, with a slight chuckle. “You charge by the minute!“ He scribbled down a few more questions. As they passed the pad back and forth, he began to realize her story was fitting the pattern of the “Hear No Evil” part of the old saying. “So, how did you lose your hearing?” he finally wrote…. Did your ears just suddenly fall off--or what??”

“No!!” Miss Blue sobbed convulsively. “They .... just .... disappeared!! .... I woke up one morning and they were gone!” ….. “There, there!” consoled Detective Keen, as he took her in his arms and let her cry on his shoulder. Then he walked Miss Blue to the bathroom, so she could repair her makeup while he talked to Miss Blaine.”

“What is it about these dames?” Detective Keen thought to himself, as he signaled to Miss Blaine to sit next to him.  Ã¢Â€ÂœThis one’s skirt is so short I can see she is not wearing any underwear, and she is NOT a natural blonde!!”

“Miss Blaine, I understand you are a pin-up model,” said Detective Keen as he handed the yellow legal pad to Miss Blaine so she could write her answers to his questions. “Is that the only thing you do to earn a living?”

“Sometimes I work as a clairvoyant and hold séances,” Miss Blaine wrote on the pad. “I see,” replied Detective Keene, “And are you the real deal? Can you actually communicate with the dead?”

“Nah! I just make it up as I go along! …. I tell my clients what they want to hear!” confessed Miss Blaine via her scribbling. “I work with a partner.” ….. “Hmmmmm!” thought Keen to himself. “A professional liar!! Well, well. Fits right in with the ‘Speak No Evil’ part of my theory!”

After the women had left his office, Detective Keen frowned as he considered their stories. “I definitely see a pattern emerging here,” Detective Keene dictated into his machine. “Apparently, someone thinks Miss Grant should see no evil, Miss Blue should hear no evil, and Miss Blaine should speak no evil. I know Black Magic just has to figure into this somewhere, but how? That is the question!!”

Answer 2

hehe so they all traded each other!! miss grant pulled a van gogh and cut her ears off and gave em to miss blue, and miss blue was sick of using her voice so much and she gave it to miss blaine, then miss blane no longer needed her eyes so she gave em to miss grant

and they all lived happily ever after

the end  

Answer 3

2 points!!!

Answer 4

Detective Keen  had not gotten to where he was by being stupid!

He surmised that behind these lovely ladies losses lurked some Black Magic.

He thought of an old saying he had heard as a child..

"See no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil"

Somehow  he knew that this was the key to solving this "robbery".

He decided to interview the ladies separately starting with Miss Grant.

She arrived early wearing a pair of huge black sunglasses to hide her sightless eyes.

Despite not being able to see, she was still mightily aware of of her power over the opposite s*x and was using it to her advantage!

As Detective keen questioned her he watched her not so subtle body movements as he fought the urge to be sidetracked by her loveliness.

As her story unfolded he discovered that...........