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Question

you were never there when i needed you the most

off drinking or smoking doing stuff you thought was cool

forgeting your friends and family losing sight of what was right

all this did was leave a void in your soul

the people who looked up to you now turned their head in shame

as you look in the mirror the face that once stared back now shattered and cold

as your forhead strikes the mirror streams of blood run down your face

you walk to the roof praying with each step

as you stand on the edge and look back at the door

you lean backwards and feel the wind against your back

as your life flashes before your eyes

memories of the times that were once good puts one last smile on your face

as the bright light you stared up at suddenly turns black.

Answer 1

that's deep, but also depressing.