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Life of carmelle, the social reject.?

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i noticed that so many girls are reading girly books like the sisterhood and others, so i decided to write a book myself, its called life of carmelle social reject, just wondering if you might like it and if its good enough to publish.

Title: Life Of Carmelle The Social Reject.

Blurb: Life for carmelle is hard, aspecially if your a social reject like she is, carmelle will find out just how crule 9th grade girls can be.

she gains confedence through a family crisis, find out how she brings the social status of the queen bee in brownville high crashing down!

anyway she gets bullied and has a yo mamma show down, her parents cheat on eachother and gets tricked into a false love, she wants to comit suiside, has the best nite of her life and theres always somthing going on.

tell me how i can improve my story or change, tell me 1 out of 10 if you would read it and or would like it!

thanks!

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  1. I personally think it sounds okay, but I don't know if I would read it. One way to improve is work on your spelling (especially not aspecially; night not nite) and capitalization. There are quite a few misspellings and you need better punctuation. The story might be good, but I know that I have a tough time reading things that look as if they have never been re-read. Try getting someone to edit and proof-read your story, so most mistakes would get taken care of.

    As for the actual story, it sounds sort of interesting, but it just doesn't sound like the type of book that I would read.

    On a 1 to 10 scale as to whether or not I would read it, I'd give it about a 5 or 6.

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