Lifes Poem?

Question

Ghost of the past

Ride carousels

Occasionally they knock

On our doors

Are you home ?

Can you please?

Tell me the way to the future

Kings & Pirate faces glance

At fences

Roaming high seas tension

World on fire

Rockets fly past in contemplation

Life’s treasure deep

Talk to us in deep summation

Answer 1

Well honestly i don't know what you're talking about. Sounds like a good poem, has excellent rhythm, and tone. But to me as long as you find meaning to this poem, then its a great poem. Dont find recognition in poetry, just because people say it sucks dosen't literally mean it sucks .