Like meh song it took me all year to creat it from the bottom of my heart ?^.^?

Question

I wanted u.......

U didn't want me.......

Isn't this destiny?

i sat with u under the tree

u looked at me.

and i looked into thee

i know ur Young

and i know I'm old

but baby

our love with unfold

i see u when ur sleeping

oh baby i know I'm like santa clause

and i know its against Federal laws

but i like to l**k little kits paws ^.^

so do u like to smell me two?

cuz i do like to smell u

lets take a bath

lets get a Little freaky

lets go with that rubber duck that's squeaky

when we first touched

u and i

made a pie

back at my house

in ur see though blouse

i touched ur bumbag

and u said...........

yummyummm

but then

i spilled oil on ur chest

now u have one less brest

but the other one is still the best

now its time to get married

the end

Answer 1

lol.

classic.

Answer 2

Personally, I don't like songs that rhyme.

Answer 3

i know ur SIMPLY ASKING FOR RUDE ANSWERS.

so here, ill fulfill ur deep desires

ur a ****** dill hole and i hope u choke on that one breast...

and yes it is against federal laws and im sure sum1 here will send it to the feds so they can come and arrest ur pedofile ***

Answer 4

Some of the rhymes were corny. You know, not all songs have to rhyme. And talking about the breast? really?

Start out as a poem that means something, then doing lots of editings. Think about it first, does it sound right? Does it have something better to it?

But the rest were pretty good. Don't get mad at me, I'm just being a critic [=

Answer 5

I think that is so super great. Smile for you ^-^

Answer 6

this is the most perverted poem ever

if you are talkin about a young girl your disgusting

even if you not your nasty

your retarted

GAFL..........and if ya dont know wat it means figure it out!!!!!!!!!!